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Post by CrEAdor on Feb 16, 2007 18:28:12 GMT -5
This is the first post you will have on the great Titanic!! You should try to make it your best! There are just a few guidelines that I want you to follow.
+Please make it at least two good paragraphs. +Tell how and why the person is aboard the Titanic. +Tell of how they feel and how they look. +People can't talk to one another. Post once and then you are done! +Don't post anywhere else but here!
Now since I am an admin, I can't tell my members to do something that I can't. So I shall give you an example!
The carriage bounced around on the road. The horses snorted while Memnoch watched them with eager pools. The clothes he wore was to make his twin happy. Showing his class and the reason why he was there, business. Nice way for the Titanic to get more tickets sold. The famous entering and getting whatever the hell they wanted. Sadly it didn't mean anything to Memnoch. He just wished he would see her there. The blue eyes, dark hair. The taste of her velvets. His mind went off. . .
He was brought back when Elzira grabbed his knee and squeezed it. The blue pools they shared were on his. The look in her eyes was the of fear and dignity. Tearing his gaze from hers, he looked at the beautiful ship they were to be getting on. The light reflected off it and it hurt his sensitive pools. What happened next was a blur. Everything was unpacked and he ended up on the boat.
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